My hearth was slayed by the word you said,
That pointy arrow, you spelled out,
I don´t remember to ever feel so sad,
Like When I heard that "no" coming from your mouth.
That word destroyed my dreams and my mind,
I felt like I got slashed by a sword,
There I was, trying to find,
Why would you ever say such a word.
For days and weeks, here I am still thinking about it,
I should just let go and let it be,
Yet I´m still counting the days till we meet
once again, so that I can see you, and you can see me.
As you understand I still believe we can get together,
And I don´t imagine myself losing that thought,
I will allways love you, forever,
Either you like it or not.
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A little something I wrote 2/3 years ago and that I seriously don´t know why I haven´t submited before, perhaps it didn´t have a meaning no longer when I created this account.
Anyways I was reading my old "poems book" and got really touched by this poem (Yes I got touched by my own poem, big whoop, wanna fight about it?) and related to something more recent and felt the urge to submit it. Feel free to comment. |
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"That word destroyed my dreams and my mind"
w00t! n0w u f33l th3 tru3 p0w4r 0f teh d4rk sid3!1!!1
about the poem: it was deep, the name even though is short it says everything, it rhymes and shit, etc... and so on, 5/5.
gey luigi xD (i know what you meant, i just had to joke about the way it sounds in english).
Gostei do poema, está simples mas vê-se q pelo menos na altura tinha significado
Então, onde é q entrast? ^^
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So I say run, run, my sparkling light
Have your fun and then come home at night
I'm sure you'll tell me something new.
Yeah I can see the world through you.
Entrei em "instrumentação e metrologia" (não tinha média para mais) no isep, vou ver se no fim do ano troco para mecânica.
Tás na FCUP não é?
OLha, lembraste da guitarra que fizemos? Onde é que ela está? Ainda está com o Renas?
È que ele desde que entrou na Univ nunca mais respondeu aos mails e assim. Eu quero a guitarra ou a guita xD
Now you may go back to your Catxyxx ou cazyx ou o crl. XD
E quando tiveres um dia livre combina aí qualquer coisa.
Ah, boa sorte para isso então ^^'
Oui, em Ciencias de Computadores.
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So I say run, run, my sparkling light
Have your fun and then come home at night
I'm sure you'll tell me something new.
Yeah I can see the world through you.
Obrigado pelo favs.
e depois tambem vi que o meu pai editou um livro e vi numa biografia que ele vivia numa quinta com animais LOL e que parcipou em movimentos hippies e assim.. o que se aprende na internet XD.
Quanto ao renato acho que morreu porque nunca mais o vi, ou então deram-lhe 5€ se ele engolisse a guitarra e ele assim o fez, mas depois na sua vergonha resolveu nunca mais aparecer.
Agora é Dark-Ana
acho que tenho 27-28 de Nov livre, ou então nas férias do natal, que dizes?
é verdade tenho um amigo meu que têm um negocio que aluga cenas para bandas (desde equipamento a sitios para tocar e materiais(tipo suportes para o estudio) e tudo), se quisseres algo diz-me que eu depois digo-lhe. (lol publicidade)
27 de Nov de tarde e 28 o dia todo tb tenho livre por isso é fixe e nas férias tb.
marca aí um jamming/gamming/stuff session. xD
mas isso do renato é mto xunga, ele foi o que pagou menos e ficou com a guitarra. um dia destes deviamos de aparecer em casa da avo dele (ele deve estar lá nas férias) e davamos-lhe uma coça mental e ficavamos nós com a guitarra já que ele não responde
Quanto a ti não sei mas eu acho awesomez, tinhas drogas ligeiras de borla xD
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